Final production

this is my final production

Decisions and Revisions

For a lot of my work I had to reconsider things as due to changes or applying of my vision it had to be changed to see it be applied in a one way or another.
like my script that had to be altered to be shorter to ensure that it retains its meaning and still follow the narrative theory correctly. By doing so you make every thing perfected to see it in the final product.
By changing that the locations also had to be changed so I had to remove a scene involving the protagonist waking into a baby's room and calm a doll. By doing so also the characters had to change causing me to sadly get rid of one of my actors that I intended to have in my film like I said in my pitch but sadly this character was rather dissolved to be merged with the antagonist to still uphold my original image.

Critical Reflection 4 How did you integrate technologies in this project?:

Critical Reflection 3: How did your production skills develop through out your project?

Critical Reflection 2: how do your projects engage with the audience and how would they be distributed as real media products?

Critical Reflection 2 from omar atabany

Critical Reflection 1 : How do your products use or challenge conventions and how do they represent social groups or issues?

Critical Reflection 1 from omar atabany

Feedback on the rough cuts AO3 &AO4

 For most of my feedback I understood that I need more shot types like a close-up shot and improve the resolution and the sound as the voice overs where not that loud and clear. 

The shots need improvement that it gives the shots more meaning and makes it easier to identify the genre and to include the production company logo and the credits. 

Improve the editing to make the shots smoother. 

  

looking at other's work, their work seems to have a lot of good points like looking at their editing you can see the smoothness of their transitions and the audio quality is audible and the editing I smooth on the eyes which makes you visualize the seamless editing.