For most of my feedback I understood that I need more shot types like a close-up shot and improve the resolution and the sound as the voice overs where not that loud and clear.
The shots need improvement that it gives the shots more meaning and makes it easier to identify the genre and to include the production company logo and the credits.
Improve the editing to make the shots smoother.
looking at other's work, their work seems to have a lot of good points like looking at their editing you can see the smoothness of their transitions and the audio quality is audible and the editing I smooth on the eyes which makes you visualize the seamless editing.